Por favor, translacion de ingles
First off i suck at spanish.
This was great. The Animation was well done and the concept was
clear and funny.
My only negative i have on this is the audio for the bush
rustling. It was a bit loud compared to the rest of the audio clips.
Overall, i can see you have a great talent with animation.
You're doing good, man! Keep this up and who knows where you will go.
This is needing some work.
First off, pre-loaders may seem like they do nothing but take up
file size, but its beneficial to the quality of playback.
Second of all, the animation felt lazy. The backgrounds
were uninspiring. The ending was cheap. Clip art is a big no-no with
anything, it doesnt matter.
The only good thing i can say about this is the lipyncing and
the motion of the characters heads. I can see the potential there,
but its paired with lack of drive. If you were to get behind wheel
and start putting more attention into detail and adding more motion
in your work then youd start to see it come alive.
Overall, i feel like you're holding back on what potential you have.
There is so much room for you to grow, its insane. I believe you can
be a really good animator if you really focused, all it takes is one step at a time.
Not bad for the first go.
It sounds like this took a lot of work
considering it was made in After Effects. All the different
moving parts having to be tweened by frame must have been a pain
but rest-assured it turned out admirable. I'm imagining the alternative
method of handdrawing everything and, no offense, would have looked
amateur so animating it like this was wise.
I liked the concept and how you executed it. It left wondering what else
you have in store for this series -- if there is one, which the possibility is there.
It also got me thinking about evolution as a whole. As many branches of life there
are, there would have to be a few carbon-based duds. (These are there stories. BUMBUM.)
I cant wait to see what else you have in mind in the future. And trust me, as hard as it is now,
the more you animate the easier it becomes.
Nice rendition, man.
I liked the fact that, instead of hanging the frames
where arin and danny arent talking you did a slow zoom in.
That was smart because it broke up the possible monotony
that a few other animators do. Case in point would be the
There are a lot of other great GG moments that could be
cool to see animated in your style.
Keep it up man, youre doing good. I believe in you.
why thank you :D
Personally, i believe this was made a week ago as opposed to when you
Im just kidding. We all start somewhere and some, more than others, are proud
of the contrast between then and now. When the tip a la kok came on screen
but couldnt see what it was, the first thought was how great the double cel-shading was.
When the Dick Van Dyke was fully on screen i thought "Why would you put that much
detail into it, man?"
We really shouldn't be critical on infantile stuff. At the very least
take it with a grain of salt and advise our younger selves to the Animator's
Thanks I'm just having Fun! something we all forget to have!
btw: this was really an old project I had stash up!
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I already have a new cartoon for tomorrow or later today(Thursday this week) so stay Toony!
Ok, this is a case of "What the hell did i just watch?"
I liked how all the characters were closely drawn to their original counterparts.
The audio was a bit off but that could have been on my end (although it wouldnt hurt to doublecheck the mixing) But other than that, it has the soul to pass the class in my books.
I dont know where to start honestly.
The were very few parts were the animation was on point. The storyline was odd, but concise.
the pacing was a few steps off. But the biggest NO i have for this is the audio quality. I understand that animators on a budget need stock audio, but what they do with that audio is something that takes an understanding of mixing.
Overall, everybody starts somewhere. And now is one of those crutial infantile stages where everything that a young enthuiast, such as youself, is deserving of the tools needed to grow and be better.
I hope this review was of some use to you on your path.
I read all the reviews and then I take notes. This is very important for me and I thank you for that.
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